Lyrics Talk:Erase

dashes

might the broken up ("erased") lines be better represented this way?

Put — box — sidewalk — then — return — next — first one gone 
Everyone — on — bus — out — lights — out — one-by-one

i think in general it's preferable and better communicates the nature of these lines in a more succinct fashion, but m dashes don't often translate well to monospace fonts. Apollo (colloquia!) 00:57, 14 January 2015 (EST)